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Loki Hitsugya

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PostSubject: My Zanpakutou   Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:15 pm

Name:Hyouton

Sealed Appearance:It looks like a normal sword but the blade is icey blue.

Release Command:Freeze the land on which we walk,Freeze the water which we drink,Freeze the air which we breath,Hyouton!

Type: Element

Shikai Appearance:My sword gets ice spikes for better piercing.

Power:The more i slice my oppenant the closer her gets to being frozen but in shikai being frozen last only 1 round.

Bankai Name:Sheito Kagera Hyouton

Bankai Appearance:My whole body is covered in ice and the spikes on my sword are bigger for even better piercing.I get ice wing so i can hover above the ground and i get 3 ice diamonds floating over my head.

Power:.The more i slice my oppenant the closer he gets to being frozen but in bankai form it's faster to make them freeze and they are frozen for 3 turns


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PostSubject: Re: My Zanpakutou   Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:31 pm

The armor can be a tech, not an actual power, that goes for both shikai and bankai. And there should be a duration on how long the opponet is frozen for when you slice them with Bankai. Plus to hit them once with it is too much, it should be multiple hits that will increasingly freeze the opponent. Also it seems that your Zanpaku-to is an Elemental type, not Kido or power. Please edit.
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Loki Hitsugya

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PostSubject: Re: My Zanpakutou   Tue Apr 14, 2009 9:08 am

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PostSubject: Re: My Zanpakutou   Tue Apr 14, 2009 10:04 pm

Looks alright. Approved.
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